Thy Living Touch Comments

Dive me deep into thy thought, Day and night with dream and desire, Thy immortal touch can flow that is rigid, Melt hard stone with soft mellow fire

this poem is so great i really wish i could make something as good as this one.

Thrilled one full of versitilty keep writing and posting

Great poet and deep and meaningful poems...... well done.

great write, mystic light

An intriguing, successful allegory about reflection and meditation. Fine imagery, 'Making me a vast ocean'.

Thou art 'O My Master'! In every sheath of my being, Every bare portion of my self, I do believe in thee and do not believe, Yes, I do not believe, Belief is a doubt standing behind, I feel thee and thy touch- -

Prabir, This is beautiful work! i feel that you really immersed in this poem, the thoughts, feeling, honest words and make everything in poetical expression...i can feel as if i have what is in your mind when you write these all here. Kee p it up

Thank you for the invitation to read this poem, and for your comment! The archaic way in which this poem is written resonates harmoniously with its theme of devotion; it reads as an hymn of profound faith and dedication, with wonderful diction!

A touching ode to the great diviner and once place in the universal tapestry. Embraces being one with the universal mind.

All is possible when God's touch is there. Beautiful poem. thanks for sharing.

Hi Beautifully written poem, portraying unmeasureble gratitude and devotion to the creator!

Beautiful poem........../////

Although living the life the poet is longing the touch of the Creator to rejuvenate it.Beautiful!

Wonderful to read even with some obscurities. Thank u dear friend. Anjandev Roy.

A superb poem, Prabir....10+++++++++++++

The poem ends brilliantly and is so overall, but for some patches. Left to me I'd like to use simple words in poetry. I think of only Sanskrit as a language that can assimilate long, hard to pronounce words so well in the narrative. I feel, there's a lot of merit in Bri Edwards's comments.

(cont.) 3 - " in every sheath of my being" ...? breath? hmm? this poem sounds, and is most likely, very dramatic, perhaps too dramatic for me. whose " touch" are you speaking of? Life's, God's, or? ? ? interesting but not easy enough for me to read through and enjoy the first time. perhaps if i reread it without stopping to ponder and/or comment i would like it more, even if i did not comprehend it more. bri :)

(cont.) 2 - stanza 3: " andbrumous" ? ? do you mean " and brumous ('foggy and wintry') " or anadromous (a type of fish which migrates to spawn) ? ? i'm guessing you or PH left out a space. and " qoud" aka " prison" ? you have introduced me to new-to-me words (3) i shall never use (probably) . (cont.)

1 - line 2: is it " dreamand" or " dreamland" ? sometimes PH connects words of our submissions. : ( lines 5,6, & 7: one sentence, correct? i did not notice period after line 6 at first. i question use of " pulsate" in line 14. (cont.)