Thursday, October 10, 2019

Thy Lips Comments

Rating: 5.0

the falling rain drops
shine thy rose petal lush lips
like the crystal pearl
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Aniruddha Pathak 18 October 2019

Raindrops look lovely anywhere, but on your lips...crystal pearls. Beautiful

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Valsa George 16 October 2019

Beautifully romantic! Raindrops are like beautiful pearls. A great Haiku!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2019

Beautiful lips of love! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2019

A beautiful haiku that captures the wonders and beauty of rain drops. Great imagery.

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Anjandev Roy 13 October 2019

Superb piece.Thanks.anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 October 2019

MY how I wissssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it was

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