Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Thy Ar'T Beautiful... Comments

Rating: 4.6

At the time when the sun burns and dies,
And the midnight moon rises,
The light shines above us,
And thy face so pretty and fabulous,
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Joseph Poewhit 01 February 2010

Words express much inner feelings

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Anju Addanki 10 November 2009

Its just wonderful well done.

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Afzal Shauq 10 November 2009

agreed with lady grace and I say the same..its written professionally..well done..10/10

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

It has nice poetic lines but it didn't excite me enough....

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Lady Grace 31 October 2009

well, for me, , , this is a work of an expert poet...nice and adorable..

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Ency Bearis 31 October 2009

wonderful poem and nicely written.....10

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Kctony Xtopher Nkwocha 28 October 2009

Haba! This is a gr8 piece of poetry. Keep it 'em coming.

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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