Sunday, November 17, 2013

Thus He Spake Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mother and her son
Sat together that morn
On a cot made of rope and wood
That was his cradle old and good.
...
Read full text

M D Dinesh Nair
COMMENTS
Savita Tyagi 17 December 2013

Beautiful poem. Loved the wits of son that made mom smile all day.

0 0 Reply
Kanav Justa 05 December 2013

... after reading few of the lines i never thought it would go like this... i was puzzled when the son said that she was the second most btfl women.... like her mother i too was thinking who would that be... the next paragrph was the most btfl part of the poem.. liked the answer.. the son gave.... Good imagination... and a beautiful poem

0 0 Reply
Ebi Robert 27 November 2013

thanks, this work is good. The diction is very good. It flows very fine. I love this work, seriously! !

0 0 Reply
Om Chawla 22 November 2013

Emotional bond that may and should exist between mother and son very well brought out in this lovely write. Enjoyed reading it.

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

The relation of a mother and son is very well expressed. Her son keeps her memories fresh...Lovely poem.

0 0 Reply
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 November 2013

Her son is her life now and he adores her the most. The eternal bond is nicely brought out in the poem. Thank you.

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 19 November 2013

A mother is blessed with a son who can take care of her in his father's absence. Lovely poem Dinesh.

0 0 Reply
Kavya . 19 November 2013

The relation of a mother and a son has been beautifully expressed in this poem. What else does a mother need in the absence of her man, other than comfort and solace she finds in her children! a v nice write Sir

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 18 November 2013

Though he has now become a memory, her man lives through her son and the mother for a time experiences his presence as the son speaks the same language, the same words uttered by him about her smiling face. This makes her forget her momentary gloom and the dull gray sky of theirs is lit in bright shades! In the absence of her man, a woman finds delght in the company of her children, especially the son who steps into his father' s shoe! Enjoyed! !

0 0 Reply
M D Dinesh Nair

M D Dinesh Nair

Kottayam
Close
Error Success