Monday, January 16, 2006

Thus Have I Heard: The Lord Buddha Was Traveling Through Brooklyn On The D Train Comments

Rating: 4.5

“Just ask Navin to ask, ” I said to my sister, “I’m his uncle
anyway down there in Florida they give pills out like cotton candy,
also have him ask his wife Sarah to try.”
“My brother, the drug addict.”
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... ... 17 January 2006

whispering 'i know you know the lingo'. an important junction in an important poem.

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David Gerardino 16 January 2006

CHARLES, you worked on this poem, nice job.

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Hugh Cobb 16 January 2006

Charles, a tale filled with humanity love and most of all compassion. A lovely and spiritual poem as all yours tend to be. May you find your Bodhi Tree. Hugh

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Jeremiah Shine 16 January 2006

a slice of life with a bit of wisdom tucked in. lets the reader 'in' on the innerworkings of the speaker as well. combines the inner and outer worlds in a realsitic manner....good one!

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Uriah Hamilton 16 January 2006

It seems to be a twisting path arriving at truth.

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