Monday, August 19, 2019

Thus, Came You Into My Life Comments

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Thus, came you, into my life
early rays of morrow
into a dark night
brightening everything in sight.
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Birbal Singh
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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2020

The essence of love is aptly captured in this beautiful poem of yours. Lovely and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 19 August 2019

" Thus, Came You, Into My Life" is a wonderful poem full of imagery and the most two buds turning into red roses. There is a hope of extreme love between them. It's imagery makes it a beautiful garden. The lively scenery of dawn attracts the reader.......... The metaphoric hope lightens the poet's dark garden, as he says. The hope lets everything sparkle of the poets. Happy journey! Of your life!

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Rajnish Manga 19 August 2019

Thus, came you, into my life.. after a long time bright hope comes to some forlorn.. soul.... //.... Charming poem of love and longing with amazing expression.

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