Wednesday, April 10, 2013

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Stillness pounces on night.
the sound of the wind,
rattling, I'm hearing.
The tallest tree of my yard
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Neela Nath Das
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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Like a waves of the sea that flow gently LIKE

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Yash Shinde 23 March 2014

.......great personification-tree bending down to smell the earth! ...lovely and insightful write dear.......

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 April 2013

A beauteous poem with innate meaning is amazing! Lovely!

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Valerie Dohren 14 April 2013

Lovely poem, great metaphor Hari.

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David Wood 11 April 2013

I really enjoyed this poem, I read it through twice. I love the imagery you paint.

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