Thursday, October 28, 2010

Thunderstorm Comments

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Heavy Stillness,
Red cloaked Sun,
Wavering Light,
Blink once, blink twice,
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Hawa Joosub
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Bert Bell 11 November 2010

Beautiful poetry. You've written some wonderful visual lines and great ideas. It flows well. This is good stuff. I'll be back for more. Very nice indeed.

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Theresa Quinn 03 November 2010

Beautiful and full of vivid imagery!

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