Sunday, October 9, 2011

Thunder, Lightning, And Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sound like giant bowling balls
In the sky.
The great giant flashes lighting up
Your window.
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Adriana Martin
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Ency Bearis 08 November 2011

Good vivid write about the nature, described well.

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Stefanie Fontker 11 October 2011

Lovely writing. Nature is a spectacular thing, and you're described it so well. You have a real talent, I hope you'll continue to write.

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Nice poem i like it, please read mine, 'Distance and love'

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Adriana Martin

Adriana Martin

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