Thunder In The Snow Comments

An irresistible lyric about the clouds at twilight-a time of day which appeals to me. Well constructed quatrains too.

Beautiful imagery and irony.💛

Nice. I especially like the line 'Tomorrow calls to me'. For some reason, that phrase is extremely pleasing.

wonderfully delineated the thunder- it whispers empty promises That tease and toy and taunt, The bitter dark and nothingness Inside this echo of a haunt./// beautiful poem

No stars to night, beautiful and bright