Sunday, April 2, 2017

Thunder In Abode Of Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loudly, loudly rumbling,
Crashing noise we have heard,
Lightening flash after lightening,
Chest of cloudy sky is trembling.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Valsa George 26 February 2020

When we hear thunder rumbling and see the sky laden with dark clouds, we can rightly assume that rain is coming! In summer when the land is dry it is a sign of hope and joy. But in rainy season, it can evoke fear in the mind as it could be a cloud burst leading to a flood. Whatever it is, you have remarkably captured the sudden change in Nature. A lovely poem and a 10

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Pushpendra Patel 02 March 2019

Earth is pensively standing here. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 September 2018

A wonderful nature write. Very well executed. Superb imagery.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2017

Air is expanded! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 02 April 2017

With beautiful words and lovely rhyme this poem of Rain is really an amazing write.To quote a few lines- - - Loudly, loudly rumbling, Crashing noise we have heard, Lightening flash after lightening, Chest of cloudy sky is trembling. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Nature is amazing, thunder is amazing, Favouring the crystals of hope, Life is dazzling getting light, Rain is going to come near soon is rumbling.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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