~ Thunder Harp ~ Comments

Good work poet! I liked these lines especially 'Goes my being Amidst distant clouds Into deep oblivion Where runs Knows who? '

It's beautiful cloudgazing. No need for me to creep into 'knowledge at all so as to enjoy it.

Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation..more than deserving of tens.Thank you for sharing.

Complicated, but so simple. Your words do not hide the truth, only promote it. What is inside. Thanks for sharing.... Marina Gasbey...

Nice reflection of the mind beyond the Nirvana there should be some understanding,10+

Mind composes what the heart sings and the voice that strikes as compelling very often vanishes in oblivion - like life. Thanks for sharing. It has made me quizzical.

By being succinct you have tuned into the inner voice which leads you on a journey of the heart and soul. Great poem!

thanks for inviting me to read this one... there is no regret...

Music of life can come in many melodies and via varieties of instruments; choices is yours. Sometimes no answer for every question given but what type of answer should comes depands on your choice. Ear, eyes and heart with real aim shall give you God's blessing answer but not everyone can listen to His words thru faith Order. We should direct our life to the right path and be a human with compassion, in order to reach real meaning of life's journey. Well done.

to aim where to go and find out why to go are our song to dedicate to Him

Goes my being Amidst distant clouds Into deep oblivion.... The deep nature of our journey in life cannot be explained, not by time, not by the number of runs we make. The drifting nature of the clouds, ..... the changing nature of man, all too constant all so familiar! True talk from the heart! ! So grateful to have a chance to share in your works.10

Masterful write. Has a unique beauty about it! Deep speaks unto deep, deep from bosom, the heart does weep....A poem with deep content.; D

Dear Nivedita, I really like the calmness of the piece and I hope you will be ascending which means that you are moving and progressing toward a higher level and degree of poetry. Ayaz Warith

Heavenly thunder as the harp speaks thru your heart..beguilingly beautiful... regards...going for an eye op..will return

There is a thundering applause for your 'Thunder Harp' all over the world. Please keep it up.

you have really created a master piece. Great job.. Keep it up.

Music is said to be in the air. The harp can be heard only by the ear open to music, a pattern of indivisible beauty. Thanks for sharing this poem with me. I enjoyed the concept.

wonderful flowing words straight from the heart. beautiful.

everything about your write, god write from heart, heart speak and you have creat, and god imagin so every in your poem as god, then i'gaven my thumb: +God bless and creat more god poems.

A captivating poem. Has a lovely depth to it. A beautiful poem indeed! ; D