Friday, October 15, 2010

Thunder And Lightning Comments

Rating: 5.0

The thunder and lightning…
Flashes illuminating the dark of the night…
Rumbles of the thunder shattering the solace of the darkness.
Eyes wide open, listening…
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Kevin Carney
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Terence George Craddock 27 January 2011

'Looking out into the blackness of night. Seeing the flashes of blinding light.... The horizon so distant, so unattainable… The rumble of thunder… Drowning out my shouts of fear and doubt… ' Exceptionally strong lines with flashes of elemental energy 10++

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