Thunder And Lightning. Comments
Thunder and Lightning
was frightening when we were small.
Now we are older and a little bolder.
It does not seem to matter at all.
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'Us children would be huddled together all day.' I would use 'We children...'
I thought the first stanza's rhyming was unique and I enjoyed it. I wonder if 'God' enjoyed scaring little kids. Hmmm? ;)
A lovely poem with fantastic rhythm and rhyme structure! 10.
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7/18/2025 7:14:25 PM # 1.0.0
I have trouble deciding between voting 3 OR 4 stars. Ok,4, ...because I'm reminded of days as a child when I could lie on a porch floor, 'safe' under an Army cot, in 1950s, watching for lighting and listening to thunder. ;) bri