Wednesday, October 14, 2020

Thru Passion Comments

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Play music, can dance
Observe old body on floor
Shake the world slowly
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Terry Craddock 23 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Time Births Us Time Deletes Us Who Saves Us? ' inspired by the poem 'Thru Passion' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE and dedicated to MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Terry Craddock 23 October 2020

God Judges Love Wins Eternity we are captives within earth time in time time flexes flesh muscles God rewards love wins eternity Inspired by the poem 'Thru Passion' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE. Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2020

Knowledge of the world! ! Mankind on earth! Love and art, Passion of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Terry Craddock 15 October 2020

'No one possess time It's independent, endless; Wisdom- friends only' time posses us, through all things time rules, through all emotions all experiences, through all lives thought set upon pathway, time resolute will guard all footsteps, until time disowns us, we are captives within time, in time time flexes muscles

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 October 2020

THANKS MB AS UR SOARING THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS PH is not posting on my pages thanks to uuuuuu Hope is vaccine to rescue from the covid-nineteen till the pill discovering Poetry is nothing just hobby being without the hope and vaccine poetic mind in it feels green hope has no existence like the humorous vaccine trace but the poetry exists in every wise match

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2020

Flowing river! ! ! Following the sounds of nature! Tones of life, To dance along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2020

I wish the final assessment of humans be done on two things only: 1) How much love you possessed and 2) How much Love you distributed or shared. A thoughtful poem 10**

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 October 2020

Amazing poem thru passion rendered, dear Mahtab You so well captured in global meaning I have enjoyed a very lot this fascinating metaphored poem Most beautifully worded No one possesses time it's independent, endless! Gorgeously said and told, a poem about love thru passion as old....5***** Full Vote for this loveliest poem!

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