Monday, December 15, 2014

Throw Me Out Comments

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Throw me out of a heart,
Though it loves me a lot,
But it hates someone,
As his language is different,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 31 December 2014

A thoughtful poem...................10

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Hans Vr 16 December 2014

Nice poem. made me think of the story of the orange. If we press an orange, only orange juice will come out because there is nothing else in it. If we meet a saint, no matter how we press or stress him, only unconditional love will come out because that is the only thing that is in him. Such a nice and lofty aim to be filled with unconditional love, but all too often I catch myself to have some anger coming out as well. Very thought provoking poem.

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Neela Nath Das 16 December 2014

Hatred is such a word which I hate to pronounce.To love human being is to love God.A nice poem again from your pen.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 16 December 2014

Wonderful poem about heart who ever speaks about love of life in each beat and teaches about love of life towards Allah. Beautifully crafted and drafted such a nice poem which unites heart and love and sends a strong message.

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