Monday, April 16, 2012

Throw-Away Rhyme Comments

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You think that you know just who I am,
But how can that possibly be,
When all you can view from the outside
Is the part I allow you to see?
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Dawn Ferrett
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Heather Wilson 16 April 2012

A really sad but brilliant poem, I would like to think life balances out, I hope yours has! .

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Sharon Smith 16 April 2012

Those first 4 stanzas I could have written myself as I know exactly what it is saying! ! I do hope in your self journey that you never loose your humilty..as that can be beauty in itself and a sign of wisdom born through pain. Thankyou Dawn. Regards...Sharon.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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