Monday, January 7, 2008

Through Times Of Emptiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through times of emptiness and shadows
The day is coming in new life to give
Light against extinction in dim to live
Be of tomorrow in day breaking glows
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Peter S. Quinn
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Shannon Wright 07 January 2008

I thought it was beautiful, a ten in my book. -shannon

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rachael richmond 07 January 2008

some phrases didn't make sense - it was as if you had translated them from a different language and that they had lost some of their meaning.... however, the overall 'feeling' was one of quiet optimism for the future, the end of a black tunnel.. ... ...rachael

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