Friday, May 14, 2021

Through The Valley Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the Valley
again
of the Shadow of Death
again
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Susan Williams
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Anjandev Roy 21 February 2023

This is an absolute gem.........thanks a lot....

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Susan Williams 24 February 2023

Anjandev--thank you, my friend, for reading so much of my stuff!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 February 2023

Love the phase blowtorch angry Bravo

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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

it is good to get feedback on word choices--whether they work or not--thank you for taking the time to point that out

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Anjandev Roy 19 February 2023

Brilliant and elegant work.....thank u dear poetess.....

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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

thank you for reading my efforts, Anjandev

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Anjandev Roy 07 March 2022

Profound piece....love to read it time and again....

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Oh thank you so very much---that comment means more to me than a thousand stars especially coming from you

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Anjandev Roy 23 January 2022

This is an outstanding work.....

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Thank you, dear friend!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2021

A marvelous poem of compassion and faith so well expressed and presented. Liked the closure lines. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2021

This poem strongly shows empathy, kindness and strong faith in Him. That when we are pinned to the wall we will turn to Him for support and guidance.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2021

A deeply touching and poignant poem. Many of us could relate to this poem. When we are faced with extreme difficulties and we are in our lowest lows, we feel and say the same thing, why me?

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M Asim Nehal 30 May 2021

Repeat of the word 'Again' made this poem very special. Full stars.***********

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Thank you--this kind of response helps me to know if I am on the right track or not!

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Rebecca Navarre 17 May 2021

Taking his hand and holding on tight, in deep prayer and hope is all we can do! .. And knowing he knows and is there, in heart too! .. God bless dear! .. Beyond numbers! ........

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Rebecca, you kind heart and your light are the gifts of believing in God and comfort all who know you. Thank you!

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Rebecca Navarre 17 May 2021

Oh, how heart breaking! .. I am so sorry to hear such! .. We hear such much to often and it is so saddening! ..

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

She beat it--a five year battle that scarred her but she lives!

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A five-star achievement, for sure!

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Linda! ! ! Thank you for putting stars in my sky! ! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 May 2021

this poem has rock me to the core, but a great comfort in knowing that I am not the only one

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

LeeAnn, you have a very tender and responsive soul which is a fantastic thing for a writer to have, my dear

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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

I had such anger when cancer returned in a matter of months and my youngest daughter was fighting for her life again--

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Susan Williams 19 February 2023

fortunately I sought out God again and found He had not left me, I on the other hand had left Him--but He was there and is there

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2021

Absolutely a brilliant piece of work... admired! Top score! !

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Thank you, Dr. Dillip! You have been such a kind reader of my poetry and given me such encouragement to continue writing.

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