Through the Valley
again
of the Shadow of Death
again
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it is good to get feedback on word choices--whether they work or not--thank you for taking the time to point that out
Oh thank you so very much---that comment means more to me than a thousand stars especially coming from you
A marvelous poem of compassion and faith so well expressed and presented. Liked the closure lines. To my Poem List.
This poem strongly shows empathy, kindness and strong faith in Him. That when we are pinned to the wall we will turn to Him for support and guidance.
A deeply touching and poignant poem. Many of us could relate to this poem. When we are faced with extreme difficulties and we are in our lowest lows, we feel and say the same thing, why me?
Repeat of the word 'Again' made this poem very special. Full stars.***********
Thank you--this kind of response helps me to know if I am on the right track or not!
Taking his hand and holding on tight, in deep prayer and hope is all we can do! .. And knowing he knows and is there, in heart too! .. God bless dear! .. Beyond numbers! ........
Rebecca, you kind heart and your light are the gifts of believing in God and comfort all who know you. Thank you!
Oh, how heart breaking! .. I am so sorry to hear such! .. We hear such much to often and it is so saddening! ..
this poem has rock me to the core, but a great comfort in knowing that I am not the only one
LeeAnn, you have a very tender and responsive soul which is a fantastic thing for a writer to have, my dear
I had such anger when cancer returned in a matter of months and my youngest daughter was fighting for her life again--
fortunately I sought out God again and found He had not left me, I on the other hand had left Him--but He was there and is there
Absolutely a brilliant piece of work... admired! Top score! !
Thank you, Dr. Dillip! You have been such a kind reader of my poetry and given me such encouragement to continue writing.
This is an absolute gem.........thanks a lot....
Anjandev--thank you, my friend, for reading so much of my stuff!