Monday, March 25, 2013

Through The Thorns Comments

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Through the thorns I see his face
A saviour and my eternal grace
Now from me
He has flown
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Mary Forrester
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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2013

This is a wonderful poem. 'And still I wait, still I wait Knowing that I hear the knock upon my door Ah, it must have been the wind once more' These lines touch my heart as I recite them. The thought of one bird patiently waiting, as if in perpetuity, for the other that jointly adorned the nest once but now has flown away to an unknown destination, brings kind of known feelings to my mind.

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John Brown 23 April 2013

A nice poem Mary, that tugs at the heart strings.

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Dave Walker 25 March 2013

A wonderful poem, really like it, a fantastic write.

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Valerie Dohren 25 March 2013

Beautiful Mary - I said to my soul be still and wait without hope, for hope would be hope for the wrong thing, wait without love for love would be love of the wrong thing......... etc. (read T S Eliot for rest of quote) .

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