Saturday, September 7, 2013

Through The Park Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the hill filled with naked trees
a flock of plastic flamingos seem to thrive,
where ducks swim over a flooded street
right below the sign: 'Blind Drive' -
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Smoky Hoss
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Joseph Anderson 19 September 2013

Could this be some form of reincarnation of the mind and soul? A great poem to make one pause and think.Nearly mystic in concept

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Heather Wilkins 09 September 2013

maybe you have been there before Smoky. who is to say lovely poem

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Shahzia Batool 07 September 2013

@poet's notes: i strongly agree, as it happens with some souls extraordinary... a nice poem about your particular feelings... the clouded sky reflects fathoms deep into a pond below the hilltop rim, looking upon this little arcane scene I feel as though I could jump down, and fall upward in - strange the feeling...

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