Thursday, May 5, 2011

Through The Glow Of Candlelight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too many windows and doors,
Remain locked and closed.
Even the presence of shadows,
Seem to be missing from view.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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