Monday, June 16, 2008

Through The Glass - To The Other Side Of The Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

He awakened in darkness,
Darkness so deep,
And so blank and black
That he knew his soul was lost.
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Scarlett Treat
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Ben Gieske 16 June 2008

Well done. You protray the tragedy and agony with powerful images. I particularly like the ending: 'on the lip of the cliff of death, clinging...what little of his life...'. The technology is there to prevent drunken drivers from driving. Let's hope that car manufacturers do all they can to prevent more useless deaths and suffering. Keep on writing and sending the message.

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Scarlett Treat

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Jug Fork, Mississippi
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