Well done. You protray the tragedy and agony with powerful images. I particularly like the ending: 'on the lip of the cliff of death, clinging...what little of his life...'.
The technology is there to prevent drunken drivers from driving. Let's hope that car manufacturers do all they can to prevent more useless deaths and suffering. Keep on writing and sending the message.
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Well done. You protray the tragedy and agony with powerful images. I particularly like the ending: 'on the lip of the cliff of death, clinging...what little of his life...'. The technology is there to prevent drunken drivers from driving. Let's hope that car manufacturers do all they can to prevent more useless deaths and suffering. Keep on writing and sending the message.