Wednesday, March 26, 2025

Through The Forest Comments

Rating: 5.0

Traveling thru the forest
The darkness has given me a thrill
The sunlight shone on me
Like G-d's eyes spying on me with discontent
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Rob Lamberton 01 April 2025

To see past one's own thoughts and imagination, an insightful journey!

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2025

Awesome imagery that is quite heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ...+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2025

The trickery of our minds! .. Brilliantly composed! ..

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Anjandev Roy 26 March 2025

It was my imagination running....

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Sandra Feldman 26 March 2025

So well written, your fears and imained sensations by the reader fully felt. Bravissima!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 March 2025

A wonderful and vivid depiction of fear of self. So brilliantly crafted and expressed. Enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing and I appreciate all the inspiring comments you put on my poems..

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Anjandev Roy 26 March 2025

This is simply superb....

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Koffi B Sossou 26 March 2025

This is a nice depiction of hallucination.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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