Saturday, March 29, 2008

Through The Eyes Of An Eagle... Comments

Rating: 5.0

White frozen mountain tops
beautifully glisten
Elegantly reflect glamour
right up to the heaven
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
COMMENTS
Jean Mallette 13 September 2008

Beautifully described! Excellent description of the wild described seen from the 'zoom in lenses' of the keenly perceptive and graceful eagle. Excellent work!

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Ben Gieske 15 August 2008

Everything came together for me in the last stanza. 'lands on the ground'. This helped me realize that your were describing the descent of the eagle in the above stanzas and what it saw. 'Tiny little cubs hide inside underground burrows' is especially poignant. They and the red foxes flee for safety. A lot of good imagery. Well done.

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Diana Hill 09 August 2008

Your words paint a beautiful picture

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premji premji 04 June 2008

Dear Hemakumar, Intersting lines...Good write

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2008

As seen through the eyes of the eagle the cares of earth must seem very small. A rare write.Very beautiful. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Malini Kadir 26 May 2008

beautiful! especially the landing............a joy to read.......

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2008

yes...after getting a full circle high view of nature we also had a very smooth landing...along with you and your eagle! a very good poetic eagle eye to say the least!

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Vallerie Lobell 04 May 2008

wow...sounds as if you have taken flight and seen all this wonder through your own eyes.....an eagle could not paint such a picture as this....beautiful...Vallerie

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C.R. Clark 03 May 2008

A captivating poem indeed. I love your descriptions of this majestic scene. Well done, my friend. Thank you and my best regards Richard

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Andrew Blakemore 29 April 2008

A truly great and inspiring work. As majestic as the bird itself. Andrew

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Marilyn Lott 28 April 2008

You paint a beautiful pristine picture for us here. Nothing more extraordinary than snow-capped mountains with an Eagle soaring overhead. Add colorful wildflowers. Oh, so lovely. Thanks! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Ernestine Northover 26 April 2008

Very beautiful piece of writing Hemakumar, a magical read and such a pleasure to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Alison Cassidy 19 April 2008

This poem is as impressive as the majestic creature that inspired it. Your love of nature is apparent in all you write and your fluency with the English language (not your mother tongue) is to be admired. I can see your eagle. Beautiful penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Tsira Goge 14 April 2008

Hemakumar, Thanks for that you have given me chance of jotas of minute to turn in an eagle, you write perfectly. Thank you, Tsira

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Theresa Moore 14 April 2008

What a lovely poem...you have describe the view from above so vividly and beautifully. Peace and serenity were mine for a moment. Thank you for the experience.

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Ben Gieske 12 April 2008

Beautiful presentation of so many enjoyable, sensational images. Nature is full of wonder. You depict many of them in a most pleasing way. We need all to be eagles.

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Melvina Germain 09 April 2008

Absolutely beautiful poem depicting what is seen through the eyes of an Eagle.. Such awesomes views, imagine soaring through the sky's and enjoying God's gifts from high above the earth's surface. Wow! one can only imagine what that would be like. You took us there through your poetic beauty Hemakumar, you brought the reader into the poem and gave a true picture of what an Eagle would see on a daily basis. I truly enjoyed the experience, please do keep writing. Melvina

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David Desantis 07 April 2008

Beautiful work my friend. hahha you made me want to be an eagle! Check out mine if you get a chance, im new to this site and would appreciate feedback.

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Usha Pisharody 07 April 2008

Picturesque and vivid! Along with the visual treat, we are also given the subtle inflections of the hint of pride and power held well in check. A really good read!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 April 2008

most scintillating picturesque of nature when versed the subtle words when dazzle yet with the elegance and the imagery when flows by the eloquence...................simply beautiful and i admire,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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