White frozen mountain tops
beautifully glisten
Elegantly reflect glamour
right up to the heaven
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Everything came together for me in the last stanza. 'lands on the ground'. This helped me realize that your were describing the descent of the eagle in the above stanzas and what it saw. 'Tiny little cubs hide inside underground burrows' is especially poignant. They and the red foxes flee for safety. A lot of good imagery. Well done.
As seen through the eyes of the eagle the cares of earth must seem very small. A rare write.Very beautiful. Warmest regards, Sandra
beautiful! especially the landing............a joy to read.......
yes...after getting a full circle high view of nature we also had a very smooth landing...along with you and your eagle! a very good poetic eagle eye to say the least!
wow...sounds as if you have taken flight and seen all this wonder through your own eyes.....an eagle could not paint such a picture as this....beautiful...Vallerie
A captivating poem indeed. I love your descriptions of this majestic scene. Well done, my friend. Thank you and my best regards Richard
A truly great and inspiring work. As majestic as the bird itself. Andrew
You paint a beautiful pristine picture for us here. Nothing more extraordinary than snow-capped mountains with an Eagle soaring overhead. Add colorful wildflowers. Oh, so lovely. Thanks! Best Wishes, Marilyn
Very beautiful piece of writing Hemakumar, a magical read and such a pleasure to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This poem is as impressive as the majestic creature that inspired it. Your love of nature is apparent in all you write and your fluency with the English language (not your mother tongue) is to be admired. I can see your eagle. Beautiful penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Hemakumar, Thanks for that you have given me chance of jotas of minute to turn in an eagle, you write perfectly. Thank you, Tsira
What a lovely poem...you have describe the view from above so vividly and beautifully. Peace and serenity were mine for a moment. Thank you for the experience.
Beautiful presentation of so many enjoyable, sensational images. Nature is full of wonder. You depict many of them in a most pleasing way. We need all to be eagles.
Absolutely beautiful poem depicting what is seen through the eyes of an Eagle.. Such awesomes views, imagine soaring through the sky's and enjoying God's gifts from high above the earth's surface. Wow! one can only imagine what that would be like. You took us there through your poetic beauty Hemakumar, you brought the reader into the poem and gave a true picture of what an Eagle would see on a daily basis. I truly enjoyed the experience, please do keep writing. Melvina
Beautiful work my friend. hahha you made me want to be an eagle! Check out mine if you get a chance, im new to this site and would appreciate feedback.
Picturesque and vivid! Along with the visual treat, we are also given the subtle inflections of the hint of pride and power held well in check. A really good read!
most scintillating picturesque of nature when versed the subtle words when dazzle yet with the elegance and the imagery when flows by the eloquence...................simply beautiful and i admire,10/10, thanks for sharing
Beautifully described! Excellent description of the wild described seen from the 'zoom in lenses' of the keenly perceptive and graceful eagle. Excellent work!