Monday, September 3, 2018

Through The Cracks Comments

Rating: 5.0

When one stripes the stony rocks,
Beauty is unveiled through the cracks,
How soft is the stone hidden in frocks!
I see beauty in the feminine packs.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2018

A wonderful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. Great imagery. Well crafted write.10]

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Kelly Kurt 04 September 2018

The inspiration of nature.

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William Shakespeare 04 September 2018

O the cracks through which beauty appears. I'm swooning neath the stars. My comment is 400 yrears old. I have a time machine. I remember your goatee.

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Rajnish Manga 04 September 2018

Great use of metaphor to explain the exquisite beauty of nature. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Dillip Dill 04 September 2018

You are cracked. Cracked this poen I mean.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 September 2018

Akhtar, such an splendid poem.........................10+++++++++++++++

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