I can see the blue sky, turning delicately shades of violet and blue; soon darkness will come,
I can see on the horizon Venus appear, the brightest star ever;
The wished-for, the longed for, by children and lovers the world over
Dusk now will dimple over her shoulder at the night, gather her robes and depart
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Rani... It's good to know that there are people who don't just glance at things and shrug their shoulders but actually look at things and wonder! May I say that you and I are alike in that we don't just see the stars twinkling through the twilight tree, but look beyond it and then, beyond the sky...
Gosh! I'm loving this profundity Rani, you're on a roll it seems. A lot of questions and who are we indeed? Brilliant. HG: -) xx
I'm so glad you told me about this poem, it is beautiful and I like the theory that on other planets in other galaxies other forms of life could be looking through the branches of a tree and thinking, well penned,10 Lynda xxx
A treat of colorful fusion, a painting and many forms of beautiful objects i could find in this work, it flows to touch the heart, a gentle feeling, a dream i could experience. Very good composition Rani,
This poem is pure enchantment. It gives the reader a glimpse of your wonderful, romantic soul. I love to think of poets on far planets gazing at earth poets through the branches of a tree. A privilege to read you, Rani. Love, Sandra
This is a very nice poem Rani, great images. Kind regards Louie