Thursday, September 11, 2008

Through Tears And Buried Treasure Comments

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Misty as the grey sky
As the fog recedes
Mirrored in my eyes
Unbidden tears I see
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Deborah Cromer 29 June 2009

Heavy duty...I am glad you wrote that out and keep it on paper. Carrying that with you would be quite the load. Memories are as they were and as we remember. Time and future changes all, except the way it was. The picture stays unchanged. Feelings differ, but the memories never change. This poem has a level of sadness to it, but has freedom too. DC

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My poem was published in my book in 1984 and is copyrighted.

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