Thursday, May 18, 2006

Through Soldiers' Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.8

So tense am I
The falling sky
Holding my breath
Until the Death
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Dustin Bennefield
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Kailynd McGregor 29 September 2006

great job! you were right, i did love it! i have another poem i'm going to put on, and its about WWI so you might like it! let me know what you think! ~Kailynd

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 05 June 2006

i think this is my favorite poem yet. i like the rhym and rythm in this one..evrything fits perfectly

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Margaret Smith 26 May 2006

I like your imagery. This is the kind of poem I really like...it's easy to read, but the language isn't boring.

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Amber Mutt 18 May 2006

touching.another reminder that war is not the noble thing some people make it seem. a needed reminder to those who can consider taking part in it. thanks 4 writing it mutt

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***** ********* 18 May 2006

A sad poem of our time Dustin. I guess you must have personal experience to express so well? Thanks for reminding us, we need it. Tai

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Preeti - is here! 18 May 2006

A placid face Of Death’s clean lace The slow coming of A century’s Race Brilliant poem..with a superb end! (^^^) Preets

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