So tense am I
The falling sky
Holding my breath
Until the Death
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i think this is my favorite poem yet. i like the rhym and rythm in this one..evrything fits perfectly
I like your imagery. This is the kind of poem I really like...it's easy to read, but the language isn't boring.
touching.another reminder that war is not the noble thing some people make it seem. a needed reminder to those who can consider taking part in it. thanks 4 writing it mutt
A sad poem of our time Dustin. I guess you must have personal experience to express so well? Thanks for reminding us, we need it. Tai
A placid face Of Death’s clean lace The slow coming of A century’s Race Brilliant poem..with a superb end! (^^^) Preets
great job! you were right, i did love it! i have another poem i'm going to put on, and its about WWI so you might like it! let me know what you think! ~Kailynd