Through Love Is Everything Begotten! Comments

p.s. my commenting/reading took about 1/2 hour i think, maybe less. bri :)

2 - thanks for glossary. in last line you have a misspelling! ! ! :) [transposed letters] Thanks for Poet's Notes. In its last sentence of P.N. you mistyped: " have the" as " the have" . ha ha! ! easy mistake, easy to correct, but not so easy on PH.

1 - check stanza 1: does " Which" refer to " hands' love" or to " all life" ? stanza 2: i think you are 'carried away' with " love" " fashion" =? stanza 3: i like heavenly harmony alliteration you have a way of arranging words in sentences in what i'd call a non-'normal' fashion which, though it may NOT be grammatically INcorrect, may cause problems for some readers.