Through Love Is Everything Begotten! Poem by Vaibhav Simha

Through Love Is Everything Begotten!



Through His hands' love begotten is all life,
Which calms every tempest, settles every strife.
It is the impetus that vanquishes enmity
And bestows upon the forlorn, the gift of amity.

The sun does endow its purity onto the world-
In reception, the tree gives its fruit, infused with love conserved.
In gratitude, the living on it feeds; such joy does this all allow.
This fashion goes on to help the lame; before Him made was of love, a vow!

And so child to child, kept is this bond lovely
Wherein the lame exalts nature generously!
From time to time, with salvation, complete is this hierarchy:
Be loved forever now, in God's heavenly harmony.

Through love alone, our existence remains perpetual:
By love alone, defined is an individual.
Then find your self havened from darkness by the deific solstice,
Ascension to bliss may you have; may you destory the abyss!

Monday, November 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love and friendship,salvation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem celebrates the emotion of love that is unabating and ever-consistent: right from the Genesis to the contemporary world. The poem generates a metaphorical simulacrum of my intentions: which is to convey the message, "love leads to salvation".

The Lord creates the firmament and life with love that is perpetual. Inspired by this, the sun is seized by the desire to share its purity (light)with the beings on Earth. The trees imbibe this love-infused light, and beget fruits that also act as messengers of love. The fashion (process)goes on until the humans, who were influenced by the trees' undemanding benignity, help the lame (and poor) . This thus seals the bond or covenant with God that assures salvation in exchange for continued expression of love. The lame, who were deemed to not the have capacity to aid others, begin enhancing nature, thus forming a lovely cycle.

Glossary: -
1. His, Him (with capitalised 'H') : refera to God
2. Deific Solstice: symbolises the divine light or Providence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

p.s. my commenting/reading took about 1/2 hour i think, maybe less. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

2 - thanks for glossary. in last line you have a misspelling! ! ! :) [transposed letters] Thanks for Poet's Notes. In its last sentence of P.N. you mistyped: " have the" as " the have" . ha ha! ! easy mistake, easy to correct, but not so easy on PH.

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

1 - check stanza 1: does " Which" refer to " hands' love" or to " all life" ? stanza 2: i think you are 'carried away' with " love" " fashion" =? stanza 3: i like heavenly harmony alliteration you have a way of arranging words in sentences in what i'd call a non-'normal' fashion which, though it may NOT be grammatically INcorrect, may cause problems for some readers.

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