Through His Mistakes! ! ! Comments

People who have been hurt tend to put up barriers or walls Now she's waiting for the person who can stay long enough to be able to knock them down. She should get a chance. Yeah time can seem really slow, but time might be the very key that it takes. Awesome work

Very nice and Very true! ...

I like this a lot... but you're going to leave her because she's been hurt and has up all these walls to protect herself from being hurt agian... maybe you should just let her say she's sorry and give her the chance to let you in and let you help her break the walls she built to keep men out. because in leaving her you will hurt her yet agian because you being with her... she let down wall number one... she let you in.

YAY IM FIRST TO COMMENTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! ! ! *yipee* Wow...this poem is very....sad. When i read this i wanted to just....cry. I truly wonder if this is what you're going through because if it is i hope that it all works out... I love your poems especially this one 10 as always ^_^ -Tyease