Friday, February 21, 2014

Through Her Eyes Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

I brought her into this world,
But she is like a mother to me,
Darkness is the only colour for me,
Though I see the beautiful world,
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Archana Kapoor Nagpal
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Archana. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Omar Eldamsheety 02 June 2014

Really it is a very nice poem

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Shraddha The Poetess 26 February 2014

a veryyyyyyy beautiful as well as emotional poem.............hats offff............ this poem should get even must get 100/10................. loved it...; ] also invite yu to read my poems on maa.......

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Archana Kapoor Nagpal 21 February 2014

Thanks Brian! Thanks for the vote as 10/10. It is a special ppoem for me as well. I still cry when I read this poem.

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Brian Johnston 21 February 2014

What an honor to cast the first vote of 10 for this lovely poem. My eyes are full of tears. I love too that the child is female and the innocence exemplified in the simplicity of her sharing her vision of the world. Write on dear poet!

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