Throne Of Arrows Comments

Loneliness! ! A dark new moon of destruction. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautiful line...i must quote Now We were condemned to decide for a throne of arrows fixed with our eyes dazzling, our heart beating still though not for a sun but for a horizon full of love and hope....thanks

A nice philosophical poem of unique style. Well represented.

This is the most beautiful poem sir..... I like this poem....It was so nicely written.....

A lovely poem to read.Thanks for sharing.

….our heart beating still though not for a sun but for a horizon full of love and hope…..Fabulous expression! Thanks dear Binaya for sharing!

Sun heading for a blood bath and faded colours of hope and a dark new moon of destruction.i enjoy your poem

once we aimed at the sun rising with a promising morn with immense possibilities. We started with new dreams and fresh hopes! Unfortunately, we are hurtled into darkness and loneliness! Our thoughts turn bitter and our blood gets polluted! Life is turned into battle...! Let us wait for a new sunrise! Great write! A 10

our heart beating still thoughnot for a sun but for ahorizon full of love and hope. A nice poem of hope shared.

A great start with a nice poem, Binaya. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Sun heading for a blood bath and faded colours of hope and a dark new moon of destruction. - A Beautiful write. Nice use of words.!

.....but ended in a blood bath and faded colours of hope and a dark new moon of destruction. A long and strong longing for a horizon, full of love and hope will never go astray, sir. For every night dawns with a Newer Sun-young, lovely and bright. Thanks for entering PH Brotherhood. Would have been difficult to recognize, had I not read its Odia version. Welcome Sir, the journey will be accompanying onwards. A huge applause with 10+++++++++++++++++++++. Regards. Subhas

our heart beating still thoughnot for a sun but for ahorizon full of love and hope. A poem of a new taste...Loved reading it sir. Thanks for sharing it. 10++

Arrows of innumerable frustration provoke thought entirely. Still a promising morn with immense possibilities. Life carries hope, dignity and trust to find love of rays of light from sun, from nature and from God. Loneliness sometimes scribbles mind to sit on throne of arrows. With due patience while you come up from frustration you feel life's light in true wisdom gained in loneliness. May God bring happiness! ..10..Welcome to PoemHunter.