Friday, March 30, 2018

Thrive And Grow Comments

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A caterpillar struggles inside the cocoon
Striving to come out to see the beautiful world
If it does not thrive how could it be free
But somehow it will get the drive to break the shell
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Rini Shibu
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 April 2018

Sometimes there is that stage in life that requires us to give our utmost efforts to attain what we want to be.in life. If we persevere, and in God's own time, we will.be able to transform and achieve more than what we had aimed for...A poem elegantly penned that depicts realities of life.10

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Rini shibu 04 April 2018

Thank you so much Rose for reading this poem and for your wonderful comment..! !

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Nudershada Cabanes 01 April 2018

A beautiful poem Rini.only by struggling can we see the real beauty of life. Well penned.19.

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Rini shibu 02 April 2018

Thank you so much Nuder..! !

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Unwritten Soul 01 April 2018

And it flies adding colors to nature this line is really colourful line that break beautiful words to be more, to be a wonderful poetic expression. nice work Rini

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Rini Shibu 01 April 2018

Thank you so much Soul..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

Such an outstanding poem you have created dear Rini. Without effort one can't thrive. The theme is nicely presented throuh a caterpillar. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 01 April 2018

Thanks Kumar for your wonderful comment..! ! Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

Such a outstanding poem you have created dear Rini. Without effort one can't thrive. The theme is nicely presented throuh a caterpillar. Thanks.

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Bipasha D 30 March 2018

With dedication, effort and hard work, one can thrive and grow. Thanks Rini for this lovely poem

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Rini Shibu 31 March 2018

Thanks Bipasha..! ! ! Rini

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Lamar Cole 30 March 2018

This is a very nice poem about a caterpillar.

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Rini Shibu 31 March 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your remarks..! ! ! Rini

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Susan Williams 30 March 2018

A caterpillar struggles inside the cocoon Striving to come out to see the beautiful world- - - they do, don't they? Birthing is not an easy process- -takes will, determination, to leave the old and take on the new. Good thought provoking poem.

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Rini Shibu 31 March 2018

Thank you so much Susan..! ! Rini

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 March 2018

Perseverance in effort yields in the end. Beauty is the fruit of a tree called Striving-hard. A nice theme to work on, dear Rini. Thanks for the short and lovely poem. Subhas

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Rini Shibu 30 March 2018

Thanks subhas for your comment..! ! Rini

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