A caterpillar struggles inside the cocoon
Striving to come out to see the beautiful world
If it does not thrive how could it be free
But somehow it will get the drive to break the shell
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A beautiful poem Rini.only by struggling can we see the real beauty of life. Well penned.19.
And it flies adding colors to nature this line is really colourful line that break beautiful words to be more, to be a wonderful poetic expression. nice work Rini
Such an outstanding poem you have created dear Rini. Without effort one can't thrive. The theme is nicely presented throuh a caterpillar. Thanks.
Such a outstanding poem you have created dear Rini. Without effort one can't thrive. The theme is nicely presented throuh a caterpillar. Thanks.
With dedication, effort and hard work, one can thrive and grow. Thanks Rini for this lovely poem
A caterpillar struggles inside the cocoon Striving to come out to see the beautiful world- - - they do, don't they? Birthing is not an easy process- -takes will, determination, to leave the old and take on the new. Good thought provoking poem.
Perseverance in effort yields in the end. Beauty is the fruit of a tree called Striving-hard. A nice theme to work on, dear Rini. Thanks for the short and lovely poem. Subhas
Sometimes there is that stage in life that requires us to give our utmost efforts to attain what we want to be.in life. If we persevere, and in God's own time, we will.be able to transform and achieve more than what we had aimed for...A poem elegantly penned that depicts realities of life.10
Thank you so much Rose for reading this poem and for your wonderful comment..! !