leaves  scattered across the soft waking earth...
 
moon shine..sun beams weaving blankets..weightless formless glittering with their own
illumination...
                
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I think it is very interesting and the contrast runs deep. very nice poem

 
                     
                
Very nice, a spiritual voyage of sorts..like the line the shifting swirling shimmering fabric of eternity, very rich