Saturday, May 16, 2009

Threshold Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

When friendly concern becomes more than need
For occasional contact, - - then beware!
When you find yourself feeding too deeply
On words, and yearning for more, - - then take care!
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Fowler 27 May 2009

Warm, aware, and very revealing. A gentle poem of great merit. 10, of course. As always, Sandra

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Catrina Heart 27 May 2009

Hahahahaha this was a fabulous awareness poem Fay! thanks for the advice.......10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

An excellent write, amazing,10++

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fay this is beautiful. you captured it well

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Sally Carter 17 May 2009

Gentle and beautiful.

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Viola Grey 16 May 2009

...but first you must open the door...another absolutley gorgeous write here Fay.

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Joseph Poewhit 16 May 2009

Words hold out much hope

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Sue Sie 16 May 2009

Fay this certainly sounds like a distant love affair..cant wait to hear the voice of a loved one...and then you are at peace...A great write..10++ Sue

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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

Unique slant on love Fay...excellent writing...Fi 10+++

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Fay Slimm

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