Thursday, January 19, 2006

Threesome Comments

Rating: 4.9

she holds me in a warm embrace
and brings me to a dreamy place
wraps me in a loving grace
all my worries are erased
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Chuck Audette
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Dee Daffodil 23 January 2007

A bed can be a very fine friend...especially when equipped with lots of fluffy duvet's, and soft squishy feather pillows...nice write! Hugs, dee

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Esther Leclerc 13 May 2006

Very cute poem: warm and winking! Clever write, Chuck. Est : ]

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Linda Hepner 23 January 2006

Lucky threesome! All threesomes should be this lucky! Nicely told, Chuck!

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What a freakin' tease! I got all worked up over this....thought I'd ask Ben to give it a shot!

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Amanda Lukas 19 January 2006

Cute... Very cute. I like the flow and the rhymes are superb. I'm quite tickled by the ending!

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

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