Friday, December 29, 2006

Three Weeks From Now, You Comments

Rating: 5.0

in keeping with this gray sky I walked
to the post office with a broken step and
tossed my letters on the counter and tried
to exit just as quickly as I had come in
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Ben Partenay
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Raynette Eitel 29 December 2006

I really like this one, Ben. The title caught my interest and I wasnt disappointed. The last stanza cinched it for me. Now I need to go read some of your other poems. Best to you. Raynette

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fanniesson - 29 December 2006

Really enjoyed this a great read here

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