Thursday, February 5, 2009

Three Simple Words Comments

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let me tell u something that ive got
something u gave me...but u have forgot
u gave me a feeling u once understood
a feeling we both shared with out a dispute
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thomas coltrin
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 12 September 2009

awesome statement...behind a lot of things lies love instead we always get mixed up in stupid things and 'forget' as u said that we still love.

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 February 2009

I knew these were the words and I understand. I have a poem called THE DREADED WORDS that has a similar message as this. I thought you did a good job of setting up your final words. You got a lot of info in the poem. Your word usage is very good here. Full credit for a fine job. GW62

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