Wednesday, February 27, 2019

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Our egos can make us fly
then reality sets in and we crash wings on fire.
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Andy Brookes
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Bri Edwards 08 April 2019

(cont.) 2 - 3rd? definition i found for REQUITE: verb " respond to (love or affection): return." SO, i guess, by " un" , you mean 'not returned' (love) in U.S. i'd use 'worthwhile' or 'worth one's while'. but you ain't in U.S.! ! all 3 shorts are worth pondering, and should be taught in grade school. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Bri Edwards 08 April 2019

1 - " Definition of double-edged sword.: something that has or can have both favorable and unfavorable consequences" ... so it's risky offering/giving LOVE (clearly a 4-letter word) . (cont.)

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 February 2019

Live Love Laugh.................///impressive part

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