Three Seconds Between Joy Or Pain Comments

Either ways... joy or pain surfaces on both ends, its just that the two can never come at the same time! A 10.

i don't need 3 seconds, even if i've to wait all day, yeahhh i'm gonna do it coz all day would make all love! nice piece Tim A +

I love your rhym scheme and and I like the natural flow. An enjoyable read. Ron

Very nice. I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this as well as the unique theme. If you don't mind, I have one little suggestion. I feel that the last line would flow a bit better if you removed the words 'of a'. Other than that, it's great. Well done.

so beautiful.. your words are so true

wow the euphoria! ! ! ! ! ! ! of the wait. lovely words and gud rhyming +++++++++++10 dear tim. love anju