Saturday, September 24, 2016

Three Persons Comments

Rating: 4.5

The fields are infertile
as far as I can tell.
Their winter systems
sparkle like the diamonds
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Fanny Howe
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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 December 2021

CONGRATS being chosen as The Poet Of The Day

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 September 2016

A beautifully envisioned meaningful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 26 September 2016

The phrases were well-written but I lost my way between them... I think I need a road map or a long long time meditating this

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Seamus O Brian 26 September 2016

A lot to mull over here. I feel like I am wandering through a field, and all around me the varied beauty of many different wildflowers are calling for my admiration. Parsing the various elements and word images is enjoyable, but I feel like I am missing the grand cohesion, but maybe my feet were hurrying to connect the parts when I should just focus on watching the wild flowers sway.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 September 2016

As far as i can tell! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dave Greenwald 26 September 2016

A very good poem. Thank you for sharing your wonderful skills as a poet.

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