Friday, April 18, 2014

Three Majestic Big Beautiful Rata Trees Comments

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two of the three majestic
big beautiful rata trees
I love were blown over
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Terence George Craddock
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Bri Edwards 23 April 2014

i hope you won't mind (too much) my saying this, BUT to my eyes your poem structure took a big hit as well as did the trees, especially after the first two stanzas. i seem to get the general picture, but the wording seems garbled to me. is it my imagination? ? . thanks for sharing. bri :) please tell me what you think of my comment.

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