i hope you won't mind (too much) my saying this, BUT to my eyes your poem structure took a big hit as well as did the trees, especially after the first two stanzas. i seem to get the general picture, but the wording seems garbled to me. is it my imagination? ? .
thanks for sharing. bri :) please tell me what you think of my comment.
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i hope you won't mind (too much) my saying this, BUT to my eyes your poem structure took a big hit as well as did the trees, especially after the first two stanzas. i seem to get the general picture, but the wording seems garbled to me. is it my imagination? ? . thanks for sharing. bri :) please tell me what you think of my comment.