Now it's time
To make her listen my heart's chime
For the last six months
I tried to tell her more than once.
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Great poem with a lovely narrative tone. You've captured the sudden loss in a touching way.
Shattered like broken mirror pieces, he saw his love die. A great touch of tragedy overturns the dreamy subtle effects rendered earlier/ You have a great poetic skill to make your reader smile with dream and cry with a scream too. 10+++ for the poem shared.
Thank You so much Sir for the time afforded. So sorry to reply so late. I was stuck with my exams.