Friday, July 21, 2017

Three Magical Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now it's time
To make her listen my heart's chime
For the last six months
I tried to tell her more than once.
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Anamika Raj
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Shattered like broken mirror pieces, he saw his love die. A great touch of tragedy overturns the dreamy subtle effects rendered earlier/ You have a great poetic skill to make your reader smile with dream and cry with a scream too. 10+++ for the poem shared.

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Anamika Raj 22 November 2017

Thank You so much Sir for the time afforded. So sorry to reply so late. I was stuck with my exams.

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Nidhi Agrawal 02 August 2017

Great poem with a lovely narrative tone. You've captured the sudden loss in a touching way.

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Anamika Raj 04 August 2017

Thanks a lot Nidhi.

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