Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Three Little Words Comments

Rating: 4.1

Why do I say so little, when I want to say so much?
Three little words can make us think as such.
I always thought of you as bright, talented, well reserved.
And you were the first to call me beautiful, which was something I never thought I deserved.
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Alisha Alphonse
COMMENTS
Alisha A. 28 November 2013

Thank you all for your support!

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Brianna Winebarger 21 November 2013

i absolutely loved it! ! ! !

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Kanav Justa 29 October 2013

hmmm, , , , liked it, , , would like to read more from you, , ,

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Ramesh Rai 24 October 2013

I LOVE YOU. a great poem. a great write.

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Xelam Kan™ 18 October 2013

A pretentious and grandiose...

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 17 October 2013

Dear Alisha, your poem really touches a chord in one's heart. You have a definite natural talent, which can be honed still further, as you are very young poet. Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)

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Thomas Duncky 31 August 2013

Very tricky business those three little words. Beautifully illustrated. Nice framing

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 27 August 2013

the emotions so alive the words so beautiful amazing love poem really like it

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Kharon March 25 August 2013

You relayed your emotions so fluently from start to finish. This was a wonderful sentiment to love bravo

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Dipy Hermonite 23 August 2013

Loved your emotions being depicted so poetically. A delightful read indeed.

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Vishal Sharma 22 August 2013

the warm emotions of the poem made its a worth piece of poetry a nice and beautiful attempt to tell the heart and i respect it

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Abdallah Gamal 22 August 2013

That's amazing! ! ! You played a beautiful track with a soft tune, simple and gorgeous :) 10++ Keep up the good work!

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Khairul Ahsan 21 August 2013

The Three Little Words! Wonderfully written. The poem honestly depicts the deep regrets the loving heart felt having defaulted.

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Cassandra Jasmine 20 August 2013

I love how you always restates the title; Three little words, it not only refreshes the reader on the theme, but also, it helps emphasis the importance of three little words. Many a people are often confused with love. Love may be selfish, it may be forced, it may be true; and it is our job to find our true love. Love comes and go, but we have the ability to stay on the right path, to find our true ones. Your fellow writer, Cassandra Jasmine

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