Monday, March 23, 2009

Three Little Words Comments

Rating: 4.1

He enters the room
My heart is a-flutter
One quick smile at me
And I melt like butter
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Kirsten Gray
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Stephen Stirk 23 March 2009

Enjoyable with precise little verses. A nice read Steve

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If we could all feel like you do in this poem.Nice write and rhyme.A ten from me. if you get a chance please read, rate and comment om my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU.Thank you.

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Christine Kerr 23 March 2009

Beautifully spoken words Kirsten, Lets just hope that it's true for you 10+++

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Sally Minns 23 March 2009

wow. so beautiful and so open lovely write i give it a ten

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