Sunday, June 21, 2015

Three Little Orphans Comments

Rating: 4.5

They pranced like they were, on a grassy meadow
Scrawny muddy legs across the paddy fields;
Taking refuge under banana leaves,
The torrential downpour soaking them thru’
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ROOP REKHA BHASKAR
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 September 2015

Taking refuge under banana leaves, Skinny to the bones, ragged to the core.They jumped in a pond for a free rain bath And their laughter ripped through the platter of rain. But I was lucky to capture the orphan’s laughter, Replay it endlessly in my spirit. I learnt the lesson of contentment; A gift from the rain, the wind and orphans three The contrast of the Animal photographers and how you photographed the three orphans with the camera of your mind and learnt a lesson of contentment... lovely poem. my eyes are wet now. how many are suffering like that in this world my dear Poetess.. oh how many. God bless you always tony

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Valsa George 28 June 2015

This is a wonderful piece Rekha....! I have fallen in love with this write and the three orphans who taught you the lesson of contentment! Lovely diction too! Top marks! I have a poem with more or less of a similar content- Oh, You are Rich- I invite you to read it!

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Rajeshwari Srinivasan 24 June 2015

Lovely Poignant Poem, Dear Roop Rekha, enjoyed reading, a Poem of substance and maturity based on Humanity. The day is awaited when there shall be no orphans and all kids well taken care of in this world.

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Bhaskar Parammal 23 June 2015

great poem. i liked ti and keep writing!

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