Sunday, February 22, 2009

Three Little Boys Comments

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Three little boys
Into everything.
Throwing this,
Throwing that.
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Butterflies In My Belly Forever
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Carl Harris 22 February 2009

You described the scene so well when kids get together to play, BIMBF. To hear the banter between them in this marvellous write reminds me of my own kids, two girls and a boy, when they were around the same age. Kids often swap toys back and forth and you caught that scene wonderfully well in this entertaining poem. Carl.

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