Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Three Liners - We Remain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet as honey,
Sour as tamarind
Our relationship swings transversely.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Magical poem. Great reading.

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T Rajan Evol 08 September 2015

Amusing and mind blowing poem.

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Sanjukta Nag 08 September 2015

So contradictory yet expressing a beautiful union.... We say that we love each other unconditionally Yet we fall for the materialistic world traditionally .... these two lines are my favourite. lovely poem...more than 10

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Rajnish Manga 08 September 2015

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem which speaks of a relationship nurtured by two sweethearts in the crucible of life's realities. Thanks.

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M. Asim Nehal

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